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Our Fate

I'm staring out into space, when I hear you calling my name in the distance. You say to follow you, but unaware of the road that you've led me upon I sense danger in the future if I follow you.
  I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game,sadly I'm not anything like you!
You knew the dangers of our journey, you knew some one was going to get hurt, I thought it would be you. I guess I was too blind to see the truth, your a liar and a con, but now I see your true colors and they're just as dark as your heartless soul.
  I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game,sadly I'm not anything like you!
I think my heart was the only reason I decided to follow you, I should have know if you trust a bad boy you'll be the one to get hurt, but in the end they were right, you really can't be trusted.
  I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game,sadly I'm not anything like you!
I can't trust anyone, like you said,"If you can't trust me than you can't trust anyone at all." weren't those your words? The ones you spoke to me and used to fool me, just like a pawn in one of your silly games, I guess I really didn't mean anything to you at all. I guess the only thing that really matters to you is if you get pain from the other people you hurt.
  I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game,sadly I'm not anything like you!
Your a liar and a magician. I never would have thought a close friend and almost lover would be the one in the end with a dagger made out of pure hatrid stabbing my heart until it breaks into billions of pieces, too many pieces broken equal the same as leaving my heart broken forever, unable to mend it back.
  I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game, sadly I'm not anything like you!
I have accecpted the fact that my heart is broken as is my pride, but thus you have neither of these things. So in fact just leave me to my fate, which is not as painful as yours.
By the way when you get what you indeed deserve do me this favor, say "hello." to Satin for me.

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Shelly you are a great friend and an awesome writer.

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  • no-way-ap
    September 14
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    gawesome

    this was insanely good. whoaa. it was a acopmlete rush and a great read.


  • WaterDragoon
    July 26
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    i really liked this poem your good at writing poems keep on writing miranda
  • wow this is incredibly good. i love it filled with emotion. very good. i love the last line!

  • Mint

    wow this was a really good piece. it was obvious that u felt 'strongly' about this person. thought it was amazing

  • awesome

    it is realy well written and real emotion in it i real feel for u
  • this is really good. i liked the part that said "a close friend and almost lover would be the one in the end with a dagger made out of pure hatrid stabbing my heart until it breaks into billions of pieces, too many pieces broken equal the same as leaving my heart broken forever, "

    its sad that this does happen but its life. we all hv to deal with wat comes.

    nice write

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  • Wow this is good. Full of emotion and raw feelings. Love how it repeats some of the lines. keep it up. ~ Brook


  • Iloveugh
    July 4

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    Great i liked this alot. Its very well written and worded so well. My favorite part was when you said " I will not be a pawn in your lying and desectful game,sadly I'm not anything like you!
    You knew the dangers of our journey, you knew some one was going to get hurt, I thought it would be you. I guess I was too blind to see the truth, your a liar and a con, but now I see your true colors and they're just as dark as your heartless soul."
    Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.

    ...

    Shelly

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