the day is nice and the sky is bright,
looking at the sky is a beautiful sight.
today is a very perfect day,
to describe the day is almost too much to say.
the grass is green and the sky is blue,
this is an ordinary day here, this is nothing new.
it's never rainy or never stormy,
there's never a tornado or a thunder storm warning.
there's flowers and gardens and fields filled with hay
it feels so good under the sun's warm rays.
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beautiful day
this is really good!!! you are such a good poeT for a 12 year old!! keep up the good work!!! -slick99
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BEAUTIFUL
Oh my gosh how beautiful! Remember me??? I'm the one that always writes happy things. I'm really glad I could help someone. keep writing and I'll try to comment on as many as I can until I have to go to dinner.
You must live in a pretty place.
Your online friend,
-Animals
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