My sweet Lord I praise your name
Your precious Son to this earth came
To teach us all what we must know
That our heavenly Father loves us so
And if we follow were he leads
We will be saved from our evil deeds
He came to us in human form he knows
at times if we are weak or strong
He lived on earth just as we do and
he went through what we went through
Things had to change this was nothing new
So he carried his cross for me and you
He took the blame he took the pain he
didn't even try to complain
A lamb to the slaughter is what they say
His precious blood was shed that day
He took all the sins of the world away
what a Saviour
A contest entry
- Remember "The Lord" by MoonsShadow.
525 points, ended July 7, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This speaks out to me and shows that you really have a feeling for your faith and what you believe in. That is great.
Good Job!
Jaz -
this is so true, you painted a picture of faith and sins that we all carry in our hearts,thank you for this entry, good luck
Lin
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