"My, my, an mercy me
...aint' yew jess the purdiest thang aw ever did see!
"Whatcha doin in ah no-good place like dis all by yuh self an all girl!?"
"Oh, sos yah say now miz high and mighty ... well, if yuh ain't gonna be
no frien ah mine, yew cain just kiss it honey, where dat old sun doan shine!
A contest entry
- Tiny Ballads by CelticQueen.
1750 points, ended July 20, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LOL
Write on and good luck, love.
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*laughs* Well, ya got a laugh outta me. Thanks for this, it's different, and you replicate the country accent pretty well on the page. Props to you! It's all well done but I love the third line in particular. Not sure the title suits but it can be amusing: the conversational style when one is expecting a whisky driven lament raises a smile. Again, props to you!
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Wow, got folks there from Deep Space Nine and Battle Star Galactica. Didn't know they watered there. Good ol country sound.
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Well, now that's certainly a different ballad all right! It does tell the story of a single event, complete with plot. I love the different viewpoint.
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Oh my lol Is that not the way it goes!!!!!!
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Swan song
Thanks for seeing the humour in it!
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