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Dean, Dean,
Where have you been?
You haven’t been seen in a while.
You wrote me a play,
So what can I say?
If I saw you today I would smile.

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I'm used to you being around Eleri
When you're not it's pretty scary
And Soon you'll be a long way away
So let's maybe arrange a sunny day
For us to sit in daisies and ponder
Of eachother we can become even fonder

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Yes, we should meet,
Say 'hello' when we greet,
But I'm going to Crete on Wednesday.
On the fourth I'll return,
(Hopefully with no sunburn)
And I'll get in touch, in turn, what do you say?

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I say yes yes and yes
But I must not digress
By using repetition
On such a word coallition
Enjoy your week away man
I reckon you'll get a nice tan

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My brain's not up for rhyming,
Due to the obscure timing
Of my arrival in Gatwick this morning.
4am is too early
But I missed you so dearly,
That I'm writing this while I am yawning.

It's good to be back
To the rain and great lack
Of sun, but hey, I've got a tan!
As soon as I recover
(Won't take long, you'll discover)
We'll meet up just as soon as we can!

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