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Revanche

bloodlined sweat
ellipsoidal refractions
set with garnet

sautéed prairie dogs
stirred with Newberg cobblestones
served on Victorian plates
reminiscent of grandmother

reaping plowshare billboards
hayforks of social order cloistered, spired



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  • white stone
    May 6
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    Ahhh.... man... rock. This is awesome.


    • wbiro gold member
      May 6
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      hmmm... I'm trying to remember what I was thinking when I wrote this...

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    You are always so very unique. Very nicely done.


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    Sautéed prairie dog!?
    o_0
    Ahhh!

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


    • wbiro gold member
      July 4, 2008
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      yes, the kind of thing that creates urges, like 30-word pieces...!

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