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being forgotten

talking to someone
who's never listening
crying your eyes out
and no one's reacting

speeding fast
cause we all will die
gaining scars
but nothing heals a broken heart

wrists bleeding
doesn't take long to stop breathing
people keep staring
but everyone's blind for what they see

it was so awful not thinking of one single poem these days, so I just started writing...might be trash though

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  • peregrin
    July 26

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    This isn't trash, it is pretty amazing, if I do say so myself. I like the second paragraph,

    "speeding fast
    cause we all will die
    gaining scars
    but nothing heals a broken heart"

    The best, because it describes me, a lot.
    Brilliant, keep it up!


  • Sweet Chaotic Me
    July 5

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    It's not trash at all, it's really good. I like the first paragraph the best, I bet a lot of people can relate to it. I sure can.
    Nice write
    xox
  • Living-Nightmare
    July 4

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    its good especially this part,
    "talking to someone
    who's never listening
    crying your eyes out
    and no one's reacting"
    becausee i know how that feels to tlk to people but they dont listen. well keep writing