Long awaited
for our lips to touch
In one moment body and heart agree
"Kiss me,"
Longing Lips intertwine, hearts collide
Your touch is my life, embrace me my love
Author notes
CRUD, omg i write this perfectly then the page froze and i had to do it all over...so this one isnt really as good...
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
1200 points, ended July 9, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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This is Great.
Very loving.
Really touches me
xo -
I can appreciate this piece, the emotion is strong.
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I can't ..they'd throw me in jail!!!!!LOL!!!!!!!
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AW! (sorry i know that gets really annoying) This one is still really very good!! I hope you win! Its amazing that you can write it all so good in 30 words! Thats talent!!
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