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Think on These Things!





He is our healing
He said turn to Him in all
He knows all our affliction
How to lift us when we call























Words: K.Botka
7/4/08

Author notes

Php 4:8 Finally, brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think on these things.
(KJV)
This is a poem for NiKi who knows The Source of all healing! Blessings to you dear one. My prayers are with you...

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  • Cynewulf silver member
    July 4

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    Good repetition of the pronoun 'he'. You have to be careful repeating things in poems I think. But you have got away with it. Nice sentiment, it works. The rhyme of the second & fourth lines gives it a nice flow & makes it easy on the ear. It is quite prayer like in sound. I suppose you were aiming for that though.

  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    July 4

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    These are beautiful words of comfort and consolation. Thanks for sharing these thoughtful and wise words.

    Brother Dennis