Insignificant pieces of emotions,
written out before me
Bits of pain from the brand
on my soul begins to seep out
My tears rain...Forgive me
"I Still Love You,"
A contest entry
- 30 Words Never Sounded So Beautiful. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended July 6, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow
I agree with the contest!
30 words never sounded so beautiful!
That was wonderful.
xoxox

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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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this is so beautiful. full of emotion. "I still love you"...not "i did love you" "i will love you" "i just love you" "i STILL love you" so sweet!!!


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I like it! But its sad! But a good sad! lol Its soo cool how you wrote it in only 30 word! lol An dthe picture goes soo well! was it a picture contest? WELL anyways i hope you win!






