Bottomless purse behind the curtain
minded jester hallucinating dreams
bulging with buff-yellow hues.
His camouflages concealed under
the canopy credulous foolish
aberrations etched in false conserves.
As he trys to get out of the mist
his submerged appearances
of cockeyed crazy secrets paint
allusiveness banter that cannot
flow with liberty
Author notes
2. Treasure secrets of fool's gold delusions.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended July 6, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww the fool and his fools gold
you did a nice job of structuring your verse and the words chosen carried a difficult but surprisingly good flow , good write.
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Wow! You really painted a picture in my mind. Great job on the prompt. I love it! Great job.
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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Excellent take on this prompt. I enjoy reading the many different takes we present when we take up the challenge. I do like how you have taken the fools thread and played it out throughout your post. Good luck in the contest.
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A reletive feast of words here Maralisa. You went with the prompt and prodeced quite a stunning piece of poetry.
Good luck in the contest. This, I feel, could be good enough to win.
Darkest
Love
Wayne Leon
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