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Essence of Flowers

Petals drifting
towards bedroom window.
Resting on the glass pane
the petals quiver slightly
as the wind picks up again.  
Lost to the wind.
Never to be found.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    A very sentimental piece, the flow is soft and the emotion tender.