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Thoughts Unwanted

They're there during the day
and when I fall asleep at night
I've been having these thoughts everyday
and they dont feel right

They show me images
and play around with my mind
I cant tell whats real anymore
or how to think of something kind

Sweat pours out of my body
tears fall out of my eyes
I no longer have control
no one can hear my silent cries

I cant get rid of this feeling
as they take over me
my tunnel is turning dark
theres no more light I can see.

Author notes

This is about my panic attacks that I was having in my sleep for awhile. I dont anymore, but I still talk about the past and how I got over it. Something real.

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Comments

  • wow.
    yeah i could tell it was real, it was so raw.
    this is great.
    it flowed perfecty.
  • very sweet miss i miss reading poetry i got such problems tooo :Swhile sleeping as i try to sleep i remember her and i lose my sleep
    thanks for entering i can totally relate to this thanksss a lot