Lead me to dream amidst strawberry cream
all the sugary sweetness disolve,
slippery smooth filling every groove
as my dilated pupils revolve.
Every lick tasting creamy and thick
soft sweet nectar cascading on tongues,
honeyed desire to encourage the fire
as full fruitiness fills up my lungs.
Coat me each day in your strawberry way
as it drips off my shoulders and back,
rub it all in even though it's a sin
'cos I'll never get all of it back!
A contest entry
- Summer Fruit winner gets to hold another one. by cricketjeff.
800 points, ended July 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The rhyming, internal and external is superb and I greatly enjoyed the while

All the best Bumpy
Jeff


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This is great!!!! I love it!



