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Strawberry Cream

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Lead me to dream amidst strawberry cream
all the sugary sweetness disolve,
slippery smooth filling every groove
as my dilated pupils revolve.

Every lick tasting creamy and thick
soft sweet nectar cascading on tongues,
honeyed desire to encourage the fire
as full fruitiness fills up my lungs.

Coat me each day in your strawberry way
as it drips off my shoulders and back,
rub it all in even though it's a sin
'cos I'll never get all of it back!











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  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    The rhyming, internal and external is superb and I greatly enjoyed the while

    All the best Bumpy

    Jeff


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    This is great!!!! I love it!