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Between The Lines

Hidden words lurking between the lines

ever elusive upon the page,

contents shattered in fragmented glass

entangled with shards of inner rage.


Script burning up wearied fingertips

in a language unbeknown to most,

indications vulgar with intent

emotions declared by abstract host.

 

This natural process from nimble mind

though who could possibly understand,

phantom thoughts pulled from climatic depths

as poetic muse controls the hand.

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Used the words in this order hidden, contents, glass, script, language, vulgar, natural

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  • jacieluves 20you
    August 28
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    wiw u are really good at talking about the feeling and i like that a lot
  • VeritasLiberte
    July 28
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    What a great way to describe "poetic inspiration"! Nicely written!


    • Frogzter gold member
      July 28
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      Thank you so very much for the positive feedback. It is appreciated!

      Blessings,

      Frogz~

  • Frozentearz gold member
    July 22

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    ooh wow another great one. love your ending
    "phantom thoughts pulled from climatic depths
    as poetic muse controls the hand."
    Bravo Bravo congrats on your H.M.
    Love and Light
    Sista Tearz


  • Polaja
    July 14

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    I really like that you have created such an effortless rhyme and rhythm this is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed the read, hopefully it will kick start my muse! Thank you for entering this contest

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Wesley Storer
    July 10

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    sad but true

    A poem that makes us realize how lucky we are not to know what people are really thinking Frogster! It would seem you have one very happy family Best Wishes always.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 4

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    A very good write. Clever. Excellent use of the word bank. Very good descriptive of a writer and thought processes. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Good expression of emotion. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.


    • Frogzter gold member
      July 4
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      Thanks Mom for your continued support and compliments on this piece! I wish for you a very happy 4th! With lots of love and hugz,

      Sandy~
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