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The space beside me is still warm
you left with dawns hush
on a train to London

our beloved dog stretches and yawns
replacing your lost warmth
with her own.

















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Five o'clock in the morning.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    the sweetest glimpse of a new day starting...i had to smile when i read this. love, lane


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    Nice!