I pace the dawn
remembering sweetness
of midnight's kiss.
My heart chimes
interludes to romance,
as it lingers upon my lips.
Sheer passion flows
from sunset's afterglow,
laced in a lover's embrace.
Carry me on euphoria
forevermore,
as we step into twilight dreams
of each dawn's awakening.
Author notes
Credit artist: Last Beautiful Girl by Derzorvadur
http://derzorvadur.deviantart.com/art/Last-beautiful-girl-85777962
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt.. Semi Quickie # 2 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the rhyme you've used here, it feels flawless and more advanced than anything I can come up with
...The first two/three stanzas are my favorite; the fourth feels too bulky in comparison, but it works for me. Lovely! 
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Your comment is truly appreciated, thank you.
Linda
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Such a lovely and uplifting take on the prompt! Written beautifully! Thank you
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I appreciate your sweet comment. I was hastily trying to come up with something, so it would be finished on time, as I was called away in a bit of a family emergency. Thank you for HM my friend.
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Hope everything is ok hun!
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