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entangled

Missing image
swirling gossamer wind extends
into the sterile enticing air
of come to me

tangled in taunting ornamentation
the barren lie of nostrings attached
asks
how can this be

each passing heart, a memory’s song
held quiet in a lamp lighting
all the wrong choices



Author notes

credit artist: Last Beautiful Girl by Derzorvadur
http://derzorvadur.deviantart.com/art/Last-beautiful-girl-85777962

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Beautifully written! Love that ending especially.. I can really relate to this! Thanks you for the entry!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Stunning, love how you've closed this. A gorgeous piece, good luck