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Dawning

Brisk walk along seashore
Conversation with peepers
Fog is leaving as sun appears
Purplish pink sunrise paints
Beauty across the horizon

Life is about to start
On a new day…

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Prompt Five o'clock in the morning...

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    simple and beautiful approach to a new day...thank you very much for entering this piece. love, lane


  • Chrysalis
    July 5, 2008

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    dawning of a new day...
    the hope for tomorrow,
    a fresh start...
    lovely little piece.

    much luck in the contest.
    blessed be
    Blanche