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Apparition in the Gallery

 

 

a dozen lying in the gallery
in diffuse and milky pre-dawn light
all bathed in pastel shadowed hues


I strolled, my fingers touching, stroking
each dreaming face and gentle thigh

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 8
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    Very interesting. But short and sweet. Very nice job. I really enjoyed reading this. Since it was short it kept my attention! haha It really truly deserved that silver trophy. You are very talented, I hope to read more from you. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 6

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    A moment of mysterious play of light into what is real and what is not... like snap shots, that make us smile at their image.
    Congratulations on the silver.
    Marlene

  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6
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    your sensuality and poetic touch will always be welcomed here...love, lane


  • Cvillelisa
    July 4

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    You're back.

    You aren't supposed to touch the paintings! Ah perhaps it was your own gallery.



    Lisa