Lovely girls...
carving their future
through flesh and bone,
slashing costs and throats.
Waiting for opportunities,
the death rattle;
hacking coughs
and limbs...
dark eyes dark room dark minds
Author notes
Artist credit : rest_in_pieces_by_Heile
A contest entry
- Art by Heile #21 by Tattboyspet.
1000 points, ended July 8, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Darkness incarnate, my type of writing. I like this. I like this a lot. Shows frightening imagery here. Written very well indeed. Good luck in the contest.
Darkness
Reigns
Wayne Leon
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wow, dark! And sure fits those 'ladies' well!!
GREAT wording and images!!!
best wishes in your contest.
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why did you end it in a ; ?
that threw me off completely.
have to be honest though, this is basically what the picture depicted - I want the story BEHIND what it shows, but thank you for your entry anyway
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A lovely chilling little tale. Great job. The first stanza was great. The last line adresses the prompt well. Great job.
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