send the spiraling smoke
into the swallowing universe,
to be absorbed by astrology
and constellations
trapped as a precious flame
she is waiting for freedom
when the zephyr comes
and the spirit is freed
her kiss will be
your last goodnight
alone
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt.. Semi Quickie # 2 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 4, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Congratulations on the silver. The beauty of your words makes me sigh and wish dreams came true like this.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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They can hun, just have to find the one that is right, as I have. Love, C
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Bravo !!!! This is very lovely
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Wow.. This was really good!!! I'm not surprised that this got silver! This was really good! you did such a wonderful job !!! Congrats! I loved it!!
Angel
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Congratulations on the Silver!!!
This poem is mesmerizingly beautiful... Great work, Chez!!! peace, Cyn
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Such beautiful imagery and thoughts in this! Gave me a lovely feeling! Sigh.. gorgeous
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for my silver...this was easy to write when someone gives you one to inspire a reply 
Love,C
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Wow stunning imagery, a superb write. Good luck in the contest
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a *sigh* and clappies for you! Juls
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I'll take a side of fries with that
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And a thick shake too????? something smooth on the tongue perhaps
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LMAO Vanilla
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ummmmmmmmm I can help maybe?
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mmmm maybe you can lol but blindfold Juls first!!
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I will pass this one on to Fire!!!! she can answer you!....I DONT eat icecream!!!!!!
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you dont eat icecream!>!>!>!>!>! AHHHHHHHHH
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NOPE, I prefer hard and warm in my mouth thank you very much
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haha wow *shakes his head*
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Hey!!!! That's my line!!!!! lmao!!!!
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Oh you are so in for it now!!!! LOL
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ok so I misread that but Im just going to stick with what i said.
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lol Yeah that's right you quit and I'll be right behind you lol
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so far in where?
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