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Perfect Bride

Springtime arrives
with natures rebirth
Fog retreating
in dawns first light
On this her special day
the morning she will unite
Her handsome prince
will become her husband
In this valley of life
they will join as one

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Such tender words for a soon to be bride...dawns first light in this valley of life they shall be joined

    congrats my sweet Pet on the trophy


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    awww this is lovely dad, wonderful write and congrats on the hm, you take care
    with love,
    stephanie


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    A very uplifting take on the picture! Aww.. happy day!
    (is the supposed to be they in the last line?)

    Sigh.. oh for a handsome prince! lol

    • buffsab99
      July 5, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for HM . I maybe a frog but one kiss from you ...hehe


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Aww such a happy take on the picture, love what you've done here. All the best in the contest

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