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World Inside A Shell

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you gave me notebooks
full of fantasies,
smile that promised stars

I wrote you the moon
and all the world
became our pearl
to go anywhere we wanted to

together



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  • Swan song gold member
    July 6
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    This poem is almost as lovely as you are and you are a jewel


  • leo2
    July 5

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    I'd be a happy man indeed
    to find that place within your need.

    Simply beautiful poetry that touches the soul. Write on dear friend, write on.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 5

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    Awww this was just so beautiful hun.. It was really soft and sweet as well.. I really loved this well done!



    Angel

  • jackreed3
    July 4
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    great work...


  • Weltt silver member
    July 4

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    Simply beautiful. So softly engaging and a sweet spell you've woven here with your words.

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