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Thorns Of Love

Missing image
His ultimate touch
turned me into love's rose
I was plucked, wilted
and thrown away
for a moment
of lust

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Write me 20 WORDS

Goodbyes to a nobody by ~Mama-Mia
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  • DeGraw
    July 11
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    Aw!

    Reminds me of my ex...
    A stunning short piece!
    Regards,
    Jennifer


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 4
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    ouch! Oh but what a way to go! This is brilliant. Juls


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 4

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    Ah finally one that tells it like it is...you need 'turn' to be 'turned' as the rest is in past tense. Lovely write. Love, C