Is love only being together?
Is it only to be lusted for...
Then forgotten?
Love can be many things
but
It can be misunderstood too!
Hiding one's secret true feelings
Is not only deceit
But a greater sin than lust.
I cannot lie
So why try?
I think passion speaks in actions
and
When felt,
It is not a web of deceit
And misunderstood feelings,
but
Pure ecstasy that lasts forever...
Growing more each day
Rather than dying after a fling!
What path does your love take?
One of lies or...
dragonheart1
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A contest entry
- Misunderstood Love by Riftkin.
525 points, ended July 10, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love that is misunderstood.. no matter how little causes pain and sadness Thank you for taking this to your own place best of luck Riftkin
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Nice job on the prompt. My favorite lines are:
"I think passion speaks in actions
and
When felt,
It is not a web of deceit"
Good luck in the contest my friend. -
wonderful take on the promt
Pure ecstasy that lasts forever...Growing more each day good luck inthe contest
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