Mind racing
heart pounding in my chest
Another vision
haunting my dreams
Becoming clearer
each and every night
Someday I will solve this maddening puzzle
which disrupts my nightly slumber
Author notes
Prompt: Five o'clock in the morning...
A contest entry
- 30 Words by Dalaney.
600 points, ended July 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ahhh, the wee hours and still awake. a good solid entry. thank you very much. love, lane
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Thank you
Thank you for your kind words
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oh! nightmares, how scary!!!
yes, they always do seem to wake us up in the early hours of the morning....
a truly haunting write!!!!!!!!!!!
~ all my best in the contest!!!
Sailor Ptolema 
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Thank you
Yes they do, this one seems to really want to haunt me because i am not familiar with the area it takes place and each time a little more detail i remember in the morning -
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ya, there is always that one dream/nightmare that repeats. For me, there is usually one aspect of the dream that repeats, its always something blue and white striped... different objects in each dream.
...maybe you'll eventually figure out what it's about
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Thank you
Lets hope we both figure it out
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