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Goodbye



Between darkness and dawn
I seek clarity-
Chaotic thoughts suspended.
I seek the man
standing on the bedrock
of my soul.
Then I know-

I won't be coming home today.


Author notes

This reflects the day I walked away from an impossible situation. I think all important decisions deserve examination in the calm of the prompt.....which is:
"Five o'clock in the morning....."
30 words

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    your poetry is heartfelt - A truly poignant piece to enter, Russell. Love, Lane


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    Solitude and peace aid clarity and 5a.m. in the morning is an excellent time to seek it...

    All the best in the contest

    Sue