If time could be captured...
Would it be a gift?
or
Would it stop all beauty?
dragonheart1
Author notes
Credit: Time-In-A-Bottle-Swampy [Photobucket]
Though over the limit by one word, I cant shorten it to relaly my message...
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXVI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 7, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You for Your Time!!
Thank You for Your entry: IS time captured in a bottle?
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown 16 words instead of required 15
Oy~ I'm sorry but soon I will be holding a contest for pre-writes that I would be Honored to see this piece in for I would have Loved to have given this a Trophy or a HMI do understand of what You speak of in the AC
After reading Your words I was being shown a heart shaped box but inside what appears to be chocolates however I am seeing written notes like the ones in fortune cookies- with each chocolate- it is like expressions of Love- Adoration with each bite for some reason also getting reference to Colorado and seeing what appears to be a postcard~ whether metaphor or symbolism Also being shown parasol- as if reference to a secret or secret woman- not revealed whether in appearance or other details
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful message & images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Would it be a gift?...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh My~
I am reading and re-reading, it appears You have 16 Words and this contest calls for 15-Oy! I will come back after reading the other entries and hopefully by then You would have corrected Be back
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wow very thought provoking words of power good luck in the contest
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