Poised on the edge of the universe
I contemplate my existence.
From birth, I felt deep inside,
such a special child
Now I beg the cosmos,
Will transcendence be mine?
Author notes
http://emptyidentityentity.deviantart.com/art/Literacy-of-a-Fantasy-85289192
30 words...
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt.... Semi-Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 4, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice Silver! (:
Contemplating an existence...what a deep and insightful write...I think even the shallowest people in the world contemplate just what the hell living is all about (if only for 2 seconds).
Is the point of existence to try to find out that point? Is that point different for everyone? Or...is responsibility and our moral conscience the only tools we have to lead us in life--and maybe there isn't a point in life?
LoL..anyways, sorry about that.
Love the word 'transcendence'...ever since I began playing Soul Calibur, that word in all its derivatives sounds so magical and historical and..video-game-ishy...great word incorporation...hope you enjoyed my psychobabble, 'cause that's what it was.
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hehe yes..im so for contemplating my existence..it was a joy to shre these thoughts..and transendence..i hadnt used it before...dont know how it is such an awesome word
loved your psychobabble
..and promise to return the favour and get to reading some of yours real soon
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Great...what's the meaning of life Cin? Help me out here Spock!
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I wish I could tell ya..im still figuring it out lol
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Lemme know when you figured it out (:
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will do
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This is brilliant, and it should have won gold in my opinion.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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awww me thinks so too, but I am still happy with the silver heheh
Lov U Dad
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Ahh yes! Very contemplative and what a question to ponder! Excellent take!
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it jus so got me thinking that pic...thanks for silver, much appreciated
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Yes to question....
Nicely penned.
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this is damn good!!!! lol you posted it twice??? Juls
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hehe yeah no idea how that happened..got rid of the other one lol
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lol See what a hot bath does for ya!!!!
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hehe indeed!!
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