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In this timeless moment



Laying entwined in the braches of trees
Cloudless smokes of air filled my eyes
Awaiting the dawn of the sunrise
The image of beauty taking me
To the greatest heights







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sunrise... a timeless moment I am blessed to see everyday.

30 words.

Five 0'clock is the prompt.

A contest entry

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  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 15

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    Ohhh wow this is lovely, the ideology behind this is so strong. Waking up to life's pure beauty in the context of nature. Mmmm just beautiful. Such a pity you didnt win in the contest,best of luck for next time . Well done!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6

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    exquisite. what a blessing it is to witness the sun rise each morning, and to read poetry just as beautiful. thank you very much for entering. love, lane


  • Talloaks silver member
    July 5
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    Very beautiful imagery