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Dreaming of. . .

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Is she dreaming...
Seeing a reflecion
Of what life could be...
Magical and romantic
or
Pondering on taking her life
Dreams...
Be they big or small
Create our own destiny!

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4
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    I think we do create our own destiny for sure! Like this reflective take on the prompt!


  • maralisa gold member
    July 4

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    wonderful we are all our own destiny within life although there is some deep sadness within your words to
    Dreams...Be they big or small Create our own destiny!good luck in the contest


  • Florida Sunshine gold member
    July 4

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    Thats true... Not sure how I feel about "Pondering on taking her life." line... how very sad when to dream is to hope... to hope is to expect change.

    Maybe you intended for me to think that deep.

    I liked the poem... it reaches in and just grabs you.

    Nice job ~ good luck in the contest!