Daybreaks morning moisture
glistens in sunrise splintered light,
passing through tree line canopies
forming dappled solar patterns
in scattered front lawn
dew drop beads
reflecting spheres
of life's new day.
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Five o'clock in the morning...
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A contest entry
- 30 Words by Dalaney.
600 points, ended July 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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poetically and visually as gentle as the morning waking...thank you very much for entering. love, lane
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Wow..how you have captured the 5 a.m. visualisations of the moisture lifting up off the ground and through the tree canopies....A wondrous write..and close to your heart..In thirty words! Great write!
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This makes me want to be there as the new day starts. This does have a wonderful effct on the readers. Brillant piece.
Much luck in the contest.
Blessed be
Blanche
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Oh yah to watch the sunrise as the world around us wakes
in hand just to be one with nature. Excellently penned as you capture the essence of a good morning rise.The introduction sets the atmosphere as the lines flow with descriptive expression transporting the reader into your picture. Good luck in this contest.
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wow for the fresh days morning dew looking wonderful I realy loved you poem it was beautiful
dew drop beads reflecting spheres of life's new day.good luck in the contest
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