A piercing of the sub-conscious,
growing in depth with each breath.
Until at last it takes hold,
tenderly clutching the spirit.
Enveloping the soul with a lingering
warmth throughout eternity.
Freeing the heart, to find fulfillment
in the simplest of inspiration.
For even with the closing, of
one’s eyes, the thought plays out.
Providing a constant reminder,
that dreams do become reality.
Giving life to intrinsic aspects,
enabling strength to come forth.
Showering the body, with blessings
from on high, this is truly love.
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
Wow this is just beautiful. It flowed so nicely and I love in the way you wrote this poem.
For even with the closing, of
one's eyes, the thought plays out.
Providing a constant reminder,
that dreams do become reality.
Oh how I so needed to read this poem of hope! Thank you for sharing with me your gift to write poetry.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Ms. Kelle Marie,
I am touched that this offering spoke to you with hope. I do appreciate your many kind words.
Know that I am a fan of yours as well.
Silent Hawk
aka Richard
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THis is absoultly beautiful, I love this so much. It is powerful in words and feelings it is a wonderful write I do adore this so much I am truly in aww with this wonderful work of precious words in art wonderfully written.
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Ms. Susan,
many kind thanks for your wonderful comment. I am honored this poem spoke to you.
Your support of my poetry is always a blessing and right on time, as it was much needed.
Silent Hawk
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Amen
We all so know of his daily embrace for those who has loved and excepted his love in return .Now if only we could bring this love to shine for all and overcome the hate in this world it is truly our final goal to save the children of the day for they will show us the way
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Thoughtful Words!!!
Good Morning, What a beautiful and heartfelt poem you have penned. You are so right, as the Bible says too, love is the greatest gift we can share and it cannot be matched by anything else to the wonders it opens our hearts up to. As the song says, "Love makes the world go round".
Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem. It was a pleasure to read this Sunday morning.Take care,
Blessings To You,
Sandy
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I love the hope that comes through this, the caring, genuine love. A beautifully heart felt poem, rich with imagery and thought.
Thanks for sharing this,
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Luck,
i do always like seeing your comments on the poetry. I appreciate the genuineness of your friendship as well.
I enjoyed collaborating with you the other day. We will have to do it again sometime.
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Yes,
the hope that is love cannot be matched for the singular good it does another being on this plane.
Glad you found much thought within these few lines.
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This is truly beautiful and peaceful. Very inspirational. I so enjoyed reading this morning. Happy Fourth of July my dear friend. Have a wonderful, safe and blessed holiday. Theresa
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Tawk,
thank you for your kind words. I am honored you found this offering deserving of your time.
Blessed Be
Silent Hawk
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