Make me hurt
Make me cry
Drive me mad
Or let me die
All I need
Is to feel for you
No matter the emotion
All the familiar and something new
In your arms
Sleep will be obsolete
No need for dreams
Life would complete
Into your ears
Whispers will softly drift
A sigh will escape
As a sweet smile lifts
You'll know, then
Just how much you mean
I'll be at your side
Giving you more love then the worlds ever seen
Author notes
yeah, its not like my usual, but
i like it, and its how i feel
so =p
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damn enter button
lol.
anyway as i was trying to say before i loved this. it may not be your normal style, but it's so beautiful.
dont let him go if he means this much. true love is so very hard to come by <3
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awe
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Well I like it too, even if it's not the usual way you write
, But it's always good finding new ways on writing poetry.
It's like full of awwws that people might make upon reading this lol. Anyway nicely done rena
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Beautiful thought that you have
penned here. Thanks a lot for
sharing it and keep up the great
work here!
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good shit chica.
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Wow Im going to go ahead and say that is freakin off the chain. Your right, this isnt your usual but it is spectacular. The intro rhymes are so deep.
Into your ears
Whispers will softly drift
A sigh will escape
As a sweet smile lifts
That line is amazing. Good job with this one Rena. Im smiling very hard right now. Thanks babe
~Chikin Triss
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Awe. Who's the lucky guy now?
Good write R3NA babe.
A true star with it's shine. -
NO U
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This is unconditional, the perfect harmony of feelings, that nothing else gets in the way of. What makes this beautiful is that it comes from the heart. And for whom the words were wrote, he should be scarred for life, being loved like this. A beautiful envy of words, reading this gives.
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Beautiful
Wow Rena...this is so beautiful and I can really tell that this he means alot to you. Very lucky and I Hope that he knows Just how lucky he truly is. I have always enjoyed your happier poetry and when you get on the topic of love you really shine.
The Rhyme and flow are amazing and I really enjoyed the fourth Stanza...its so beautiful and says alot about how much you really love him. I hope to see many more happy poems such as this and I hope that he can continue to make you happy..he seems to be doing a swell job so far...I guess I am happy for him
I have always said you are an amazing poetess, even though I really don't have to, works like this speak for themselves.
very well done
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