Whispering winds
mournfully cry.
Childhood dreams
take to the skies.
Heart solemnly waits
to discharge fate...
Hope now surrendered
to destiny's hand.
Life didn't take the path,
love had planned.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture in 30 words.
Credit Artist:
http://tarikt.deviantart.com/art/Let-me-go-61819296
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt... Semi-Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 4, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Inspiring
Quite reminds me of destiny vs. human choice. There's a name for it in philosophy...I believe it is determinism? "My fate is determined, but not absolutely determined."...but this is truly inspiring to me. It really opens me up to a perspective that I never would have imagined....& gives in to what I have always believed, that maybe some things DO happen for a reason. This especially inspires me, because I truly want to open myself up to varying perspectives when I write, in the future. There are so many different things that I could write about...I just need to gather my thoughts together, & allow my natural feelings to flow, because at times I wonder if I write from the heart, or if I force myself to feel a certain way, just so I can capture something that I think people would enjoy. I try to be different, I really do...but I need to try harder.
<3
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hmmm, sorrow that is something some of your poems have a strong link to, this is but one, in the chain, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest
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this is a very well penned poem, imagery is fantastic,
great wording and imagery as usual,
all my love, keep penning,
kitty xxx -
wonderful poem we never know what destiny has in store for us and it is best to live each day as our last and have fun
Hope now surrendered to destiny's hand.Life didn't take the path,love had planned.congraulations on you shiny
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Life has unespected turns and this poem ios well penned. But winds can tell us secrets if we listen!
return the favor
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I doubt that love ever takes the path it should, that's why some end up totally lost
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Wonderful write for this picture! Capturing how our innocent dreams can disperse and life doesn't take the paths we often wish! Thank you so much for this entry!
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I love your rhyming my dark reflection..this has a wonderfully tight flow
love childhood dreams take to the skies..
Hope you do well
Ur refelction of 'Light'
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I look forward to it my dark one
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