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Love's Plea

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it's not all rainbows
or teddy bear kites
when love passes by

grab the strings
tangled around my heart
hold tight and I
will be your wings

we will soar



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  • Swan song gold member
    July 6
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    Wow! I really like this one a very promising poem indeed


  • leo2
    July 5

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    Congratulations on the HM. And yes, love makes no promises save keeping your mind, body and soul in motion.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • How lovely! No it isn't all rainbows.. but to have someone to hold on to can certainly make us soar! Beautiful write!

  • A beautiful piece of love and hope. Nice take on the image prompt. Lovely write, best wishes in the contest!

  • Aww this is lovely, so full of happiness and uplifting thoughts. Beautifully penned, good luck
  • how captivating. such a truly emotional piece with depth to it.

  • oh wow C...i just adore your take on the pic...GOLD, all the way lol



    Cind

    • Aww S.P that's how I feel right at this moment lol just singing silly love songs hehehe
    • lol it probably should have been dark but I couldn't write dark at the moment lol sigh...everything smells like roses
  • awww !!!!!!!!!! this is so precious!!!!

    I love it

    "grab the strings
    tangled around my heart">>>how sweet, balloons tying love together...



    ;we will soar">>>>how exquisitely divine, and airy !!!

    ~all my best!!!

    S. P.

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