it's not all rainbows
or teddy bear kites
when love passes by
grab the strings
tangled around my heart
hold tight and I
will be your wings
we will soar
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt... Semi-Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 4, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow! I really like this one a very promising poem indeed


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Congratulations on the HM. And yes, love makes no promises save keeping your mind, body and soul in motion.
Sincerely,
Leo Long

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How lovely! No it isn't all rainbows.. but to have someone to hold on to can certainly make us soar! Beautiful write!


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A beautiful piece of love and hope. Nice take on the image prompt. Lovely write, best wishes in the contest!


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Aww this is lovely, so full of happiness and uplifting thoughts. Beautifully penned, good luck
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how captivating. such a truly emotional piece with depth to it.


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oh wow C...i just adore your take on the pic...GOLD, all the way lol


Cind

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Aww S.P that's how I feel right at this moment lol just singing silly love songs hehehe
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lol it probably should have been dark but I couldn't write dark at the moment lol sigh...everything smells like roses
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awww !!!!!!!!!! this is so precious!!!!

I love it
"grab the strings
tangled around my heart">>>how sweet, balloons tying love together...
;we will soar">>>>how exquisitely divine, and airy !!!
~all my best!!!
S. P.



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