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Sent to the heavens.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Setting you afloat,
I prayed you were my last hope.

Soul craves salvation,
even after such desperate searching.

Strained, stretched out decades
gave me no other chance

Resigned, I

             …let go

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i went one word over, sorry but im sure you can forgive one word lol

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  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 4

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    Awwww this is so sad....never ever let go hun...then again I know you won't...you are like me,once you find what you want you hold on tight Love, C


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4

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    So sad.. sometimes all we can do is let go! Lovely wording and love the S words! Definitely can forgive one word! lol
    Wonderful write!


  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 4
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    such beautiful imagery, with a captivating sense of emotion.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 4

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    Gorgeously put hunni, love how you worked this. Good luck my light one

  • NotTheDroids
    July 4

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    Beautiful - structure, imagery, wording, all superb.

    And the eords touch my heart - so deep, so heartfelt, so wonderful



    J

  • Sailor Ptolema silver member
    July 4
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    awwwwww.. how sad

    letting go is so hard, but required to grow!!

    i love this sensual Cin


    "Strained, stretched out decades ">>>>I love this, truly!

    so great, trying to make time elastic..just long enough...
    great, great, great.



    ~ Sailor Ptolema

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