life is balanced,
precariously living
in the sin of our thoughts
but the world saddens
when neither reaches out their hand
to hold on, to live the dream
inspired by another's courage
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A contest entry
- Contest Semi Quick Picture Prompt #10 by Weltt.
475 points, ended July 5, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very good
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Congratulations on the silver. I swear it's like you're taking notes on the video of my dreams. Explicitives deleted of course..lol.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Absolutely beautiful!!! loved it!!
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I have the courage
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Bravo hun.. This was really inspiring..And how true your words are.. It's just beautiful!!! You did a wonderful job.. I wish you the best of luck!
Angel
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No wiser words ever written - this poem is so profound, so very beautiful.... has a lot of meaning for me this morning. It's always sad when two people can't reach out to hold on..yes, the "whole world saddens". Wishing you hands that hold, dear one!
~ Nicolette
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