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Demented

Sinking, sliding
Submerging myself completely
No air, no breath
Drowning so blissfully

Crying,dying
I love how this feels
Cutting, tearing
The blood and scars are so real

Take me under
Drag me away
I love this pain that I feel
It's like my crack cocaine
The negative side-effects are happiness
Trying to kill my blissfulness
Oh how dearly I love this pain I feel

Screaming, dying
I'd rather be no place else
Than right here in my personal hell

Bleeding, fading
It's so surreal
This beautifully blissful pain I feel

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Dunno. Just feeling demented.

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  • Improv Machinery
    July 4, 2008

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    OMG hun, i guess you did have an emo day. just know that im always here for you if you ever need to talk. the poem was well written and though it was a little morbid for my tastes, i still liked it, as i do all of your work. great job hun, and keep your chin up. *hugs*
    Rob