I could never save time in a bottle
Because I would just drink it away...
Author notes
Picture B for the 15 word contest (credit to Photobucket)
I really really love how this came out. It came to me right away and you can take it in whatever way you wish. I drink a lot...so this was perfect...I LOVED the picture prompt. Enjoy! Feedback welcome...
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXVI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 7, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (2) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an awesome write. It is so true what you say in these few words. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Swallowed Time
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown word: Excellent
also being shown flashes of memories as if moving so fast unable to realize their importance Being shown a camera and reference to pictures on film- as if the Mind stores these snapshots and how does one want to be remembered I'm hearing reference to niece- after reading Your words was getting get together - niece and then a blur- For some reason was getting words: Jose Cuervo- and being shown a homeless person- his face as if his Spirit lived.... once- from how it is being shown to me
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful message & images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
I would just drink it away...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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this is absolutely one of my favourites...WOW
it made me think, it had great imagery, it was short and sweet...absolutely amazing
like...i have no words to describe it. this is DEFINITELY a 10/10 poem.
wow. -
woot!
this is so honest lol! well, i think i'll end up doing the same thing! this was a pretty creative and innovative piece! original and brilliant just like all your other work! keep penning kays!
and good luck in the contes!
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wow lol, your so lucky lol it took me ages to think, thats lovely wow done hun ((((((((hugs))))))))) joss xxx
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Brilliance in swift thought provoking words. The title fits quite nicely too I might add.
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