Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Salad Days




semblance of summer cream
flowing from a salad sun,
I have tasted its sin
adoring lips of strawberries,
sanguine, sublime
and impossible to refuse

fruits of seasons crush,
blended into finer wine
to sip its liqueur
is to drown in
velvet skin




In a list

A contest entry

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 19

    Edit | Reply
    OK you got me, bring strawberries when we meet!!!


    Pity you couldn't work in some cricket, but the strawberry liqueur
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    Eat the next lot from a gold cup!


  • deercatcher
    July 15

    Edit | Reply
    I have a bag of botta bing cherries in the crisper!
    some are tart
    Others hint of a taste of leaves and bark
    Some are soft and a hint to bland
    Incinscere shake of a hand
    But once in a while, the perfect crunch
    Exploding sweetness
    Savoring the perfection
    Eating more in slight dejection
    Didn't save enough for lunch.

  • Swan song gold member
    July 6

    Edit | Reply
    Oh my you get another crazy creature for this onePlay Wink


  • leo2
    July 5

    Edit | Reply
    You make me hunger for the finer things in life. For those flavors that rest so elegantly on the tongue and heart. Again, I hope you do well in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long