Strawberries upon my lips
Place them on your fingertips
Juicy fruit goes well with cream
Now let us create some steam.
As the fruit bowl lies in wait
What can you and I create
Peaches good enough to eat
Place the stone between your feet.
I will taste it, you will see
Squeeze peach juice above my knee
Add some cream, a fine dessert
All designed to make me pert.
Come on, take it like a man
You can do it, yes you can
Summer fruit coming your way
Hey, guess who just made your day.
A contest entry
- Summer Fruit winner gets to hold another one. by cricketjeff.
800 points, ended July 19, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I adore this, lovely rhyme and flow and great stuff overall, Can I nip round for a "bowlful"?
Great stuff
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wow how you have wetted my appetite here, yum . i wll share my fruit in future ,,good luck x
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What a great little poem. It's just rich with image and all sorts of tastey thoughts. Sounds like a picnick for two would be just the right thing for summer. I'll make the shortcake biscuits!
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