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Disabled Thoughts






Each word gets captured,
onto the mental web.

As my mind splatters out fire,
liquefying sanity away,
scuttling feebly around.






Author notes

I want you to describe in 20 words
how it feels when you are confused.

A contest entry

Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 8
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    hmmm....interesting. unique and a well displayed example of good word usage