I stare into empty space
at a home I once knew
So many wild beginnings
yet so few accomplished
Dead buildings pile up
and so does the dreams
failure.
Author notes
30 words
Picture 1 - photobucket
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
770 points, ended July 4, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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so sad.... so so sad.... beautiful write, well done.
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Sad & Dark poem.. I love it.. I love lines 3 & 4. excellent job with prompt and with the poem.
good luck
kat
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hehe seems most used this pic but yes ours are alike cause thats why we are twins we see everythign alike.... great job on this.... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest....!
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Holy shit!
Everyone's been using this prompt, but continuing to gain a different aspect of it.
This was perfectly penned and beautiful..
Well done and good luck in the contest!
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