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Song of Silence

Encapsulated by thought as it passes through
the temple of my mind.
Whimsically unfolding itself and
ignorant to time.
Its essence creates a dance choreographed
by my existence.
And it rises and falls to the notes of my life.
Play me a melody so I may free myself
from its grip.
For its temper is short and its
voice so very loud, so very loud.
Play me the song of silence so I may
rest within its arms.

Author notes

Inspiring quote 1. All our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind.
Kahlil Gibran

I absolutely love the writings of Kahlil Gibran. Thank you for the opportunity to use his work as an inspiration.

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  • Amarige
    July 27, 2008

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    Very lovely piece..I love Gibran's work also..the quote you picked is very deep..you did wonderful job with it..best of luck in the contest

    Ruby


  • Swan song gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    Excellent poem from the word go, Well done well written and I enjoyed