Most little girls
Dream of
Ponies
And
Princesses
I only
Dreamed Of
Blood
Tears
And
Demons
My castle is always
A haunted house
Waiting
To suck
The life
From me
Author notes
Option 1
pictures were found at Photobucket
30 words only
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
770 points, ended July 4, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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lol I dream the same too...
nicely done!
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I am still amazed at the way that you look at a prompt and at the words that result from your unique view. I hope that in time the haunted house becomes less scary and the demons are held at bay.
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Wow this is so sad and heartbreaking! Really caught my breath!! Congrats on the bronze hun!
Love ya!
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Powerful
and this literally smacks you in the face.. the feelings within this poem is something that I can relate to all too well. excellent take on the prompt..
good luck
kat
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Ooooo....you took a dark view on this. *tilts head* But we both had the same title...well almost and I didn't even look at who entered! Twins for life! A great job on writting this
Truly yours. 
~Kystal Angel
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Damn...
This is excellent, and is perfect for the picture prompt!
Awesome job and good luck in the contest!
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