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Fireworks (Let Freedom Sing)

We'll celebrate, slightly untamed
as sparks ignite into infernal flames.
Let's find what this night will bring
and rejoice to let our freedom sing.


A low rumble, shaken to the core;
in anticipation, waiting for more.
Starting out slow, eager to see
the cresendo build, setting us free.


The pounding beat in rhythmical dance
pulsating me to a lover's trance.
In awe, awaiting the next move
not missing a step, staying in groove.


To the culmination of one fine night
under the stars, showered in light.
Exploding into blissful sighs,
I'll watch the fireworks in your eyes.

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  • TimeMeddler
    July 27

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    A sensual Journey

    A poetic take on sensual eroticism perhaps? visual, yet tamed. I like it.


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 4

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    Oh, man! What you do to the heart! That's some marvelous work there woman. It's got to get the message across to who ever the lucky guy is.

    • LOL, thank you for the comments. Glad I could get the heart pumpin' a bit.

      Storm