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Alone

Missing image
Left alone now she remembers

the words that he whispered
the softness of his touch
the passion in his kiss
the desire in his eyes

I love you
she cries

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photo prompt Option 2
found on photo bucket

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  • SpydurPoet silver member
    July 25

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    Wow. So strong and touching. A beautiful poem to go with a beautiful pic. You did a fantastic job on this.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~
  • Excellent!

    So touching and sincere your words forever flow.
    Thanks for sharing you, much love and light!

    -Timothy

  • this is such a sad & dark write.. one that touched my heart a lot.. the feelings that we feel when love leaves us alone.. you did an excellent job with the poem..


    good luck

    kat

  • yes tender and sweet..... interesting take.... great job.... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Awww, so tender and sweet, so very well-penned. Best of luck to you in the contest!

    Laura x

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