Left alone now she remembers
the words that he whispered
the softness of his touch
the passion in his kiss
the desire in his eyes
I love you
she cries
Author notes
photo prompt Option 2
found on photo bucket
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
770 points, ended July 4, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. So strong and touching. A beautiful poem to go with a beautiful pic. You did a fantastic job on this.
Write on.
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Excellent!
So touching and sincere your words forever flow.
Thanks for sharing you, much love and light!
-Timothy
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this is such a sad & dark write.. one that touched my heart a lot.. the feelings that we feel when love leaves us alone.. you did an excellent job with the poem..
good luck
kat
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yes tender and sweet..... interesting take.... great job.... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awww, so tender and sweet, so very well-penned. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Laura x
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