At dusk I set out,
Laced in my black dress,
For my love in heaven,
A single rose laid in my hair and upon my chest,
Mr bunny Please be free,
Go to the mountains of joy- you'll see,
That I'm making the right choice,
Even though you disagree.
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
770 points, ended July 4, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really love your take on the picture. Your gentle soul shines through in your words. This was lovely. I am sure most people went dark with those prompts. Congrats on the honorable mention
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I really enjoyed this poem that you have written.. I love how you incoperated everything in the picture in your poem.. its on the lighter side,
good luck
kat
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thank you... yes I'll need the luck reading all these brilliant poems...
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this is sweet ..... not dark as the rest of us went lol.... great take... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol thx, u 2
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Aw, so sweet and gentle... This is perfection! Much love and good luck!
Laura x
PS: Thanks for the gold! You gave me gold trophy #50, so I'm having a contest to celebrate! I hope you enter
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lol thanks. Oo yes I'd love to enter... how do i get to it... im Lacking any good trophies all i get is green 1ns oh well... how do i get to ur contest?
x
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